{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"65030642","dateCreated":"1384884225","smartDate":"Nov 19, 2013","userCreated":{"username":"stevenrdwolfe","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/stevenrdwolfe","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/chuchoeng1302.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/65030642"},"dateDigested":1532652773,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"general","description":"See comments. Overall very clear, well-constructed, covers everything necessary stated in the rubric.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]}],"more":false},"comments":[{"id":"64253512","dateCreated":"1381285512","smartDate":"Oct 8, 2013","userCreated":{"username":"stevenrdwolfe","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/stevenrdwolfe","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/chuchoeng1302.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/64253512"},"dateDigested":1532652771,"commentId":"456443704_1","orphaned":false,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"comment","title":"Comment: not sure what this means","description":"not sure what this means","rangeActions":[{"name":"Comment added","rangeText":"ed what we want or how we want it done?","dateCreated":"1381285512","user":{"username":"stevenrdwolfe","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/stevenrdwolfe","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"diffUrl":"\/page\/diff\/home\/458065434?mode=code"}],"replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"64253514","dateCreated":"1381285512","smartDate":"Oct 8, 2013","userCreated":{"username":"stevenrdwolfe","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/stevenrdwolfe","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/chuchoeng1302.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/64253514"},"dateDigested":1532652771,"commentId":"456443704_2","orphaned":false,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"comment","title":"Comment: You can't talk about Omelas before yo...","description":"You can't talk about Omelas before you've explained what it is or what the issue is you're talking about.","rangeActions":[{"name":"Comment added","rangeText":"Whether to stay or walk away from Omelas, a perfect Utopia, that is the question. I would included myself in the group of people that would walk away from Omelas because I would not be able to live with myself knowing that my \u201chappiness\u201d is caused by the suffering of a child.","dateCreated":"1381285513","user":{"username":"stevenrdwolfe","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/stevenrdwolfe","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"diffUrl":"\/page\/diff\/home\/458065434?mode=code"}],"replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"64253516","dateCreated":"1381285513","smartDate":"Oct 8, 2013","userCreated":{"username":"stevenrdwolfe","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/stevenrdwolfe","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/chuchoeng1302.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/64253516"},"dateDigested":1532652772,"commentId":"456443704_3","orphaned":false,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"comment","title":"Comment: The soldiers are not being sacrificed...","description":"The soldiers are not being sacrificed. They are doing a job.","rangeActions":[{"name":"Comment added","rangeText":"ne real world situation that I think it can relate to this moral dilemma would be the stationing of soldiers in Afghanistan. How it is related? I think it is related in the sense of is it okay to sacrifice a few for the sake of others? Just like in the Coventry Bombing is it okay to sacrifice the lives of a few for the well being of many? In my opinion, I think that in this situation of stationing soldiers in Afghanistan, it is okay to sacrifice a few for the sake of other. Why? Because in comparison to \u201cCoventry Bombing\u201d and \u201cThe Ones Who Walk Away From Omelas\u201d, Soldiers chose that career and they know what the consequences might be and in the other two stories the people or the child are not given a choice to what they want to","dateCreated":"1381285513","user":{"username":"stevenrdwolfe","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/stevenrdwolfe","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"diffUrl":"\/page\/diff\/home\/458065434?mode=code"}],"replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"64253520","dateCreated":"1381285513","smartDate":"Oct 8, 2013","userCreated":{"username":"stevenrdwolfe","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/stevenrdwolfe","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/chuchoeng1302.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/64253520"},"dateDigested":1532652772,"commentId":"456443704_4","orphaned":false,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"comment","title":"Comment: we live in a democratic system where ...","description":"we live in a democratic system where people vote for the government. So yes, every two years there's an election of some kind and we do do something about it. Soldiers are not sacrifices and voting means you do have control. So you need an example that is actually like the one we are talking about.","rangeActions":[{"name":"Comment added","rangeText":"you cant do anything about stationing them over in Afghanistan or elsewhere because government is the one that has all the power to control the Armed Force, you cant really do much about it.","dateCreated":"1381285516","user":{"username":"stevenrdwolfe","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/stevenrdwolfe","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"diffUrl":"\/page\/diff\/home\/458065434?mode=code"}],"replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"64253524","dateCreated":"1381285516","smartDate":"Oct 8, 2013","userCreated":{"username":"stevenrdwolfe","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/stevenrdwolfe","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/chuchoeng1302.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/64253524"},"dateDigested":1532652772,"commentId":"456443704_5","orphaned":false,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"comment","title":"Comment: I asked that your research source be ...","description":"I asked that your research source be factual information. This is a slogan.","rangeActions":[{"name":"Comment added","rangeText":"ant to be in the war and be a part of \u201cthe strongest fighting force in the world\u2026 and serve together to protect America\u2019s freedoms\u201d (GoArmy),","dateCreated":"1381285516","user":{"username":"stevenrdwolfe","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/stevenrdwolfe","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"diffUrl":"\/page\/diff\/home\/458065434?mode=code"}],"replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"64389262","dateCreated":"1381973428","smartDate":"Oct 16, 2013","userCreated":{"username":"stevenrdwolfe","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/stevenrdwolfe","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/chuchoeng1302.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/64389262"},"dateDigested":1532652772,"commentId":"459877216_1","orphaned":false,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"comment","title":"Comment: This is not what I asked you to do. I...","description":"This is not what I asked you to do. In the rubric AND in a group email I specifically said that I wanted you to make the changes on the original Essay 2, NOT to do a revised version and replace the old one with that. I will grade it this time - next time doing this will mean a grade reduction.","rangeActions":[{"name":"Comment added","rangeText":"Jesus Salas
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\nEssay 2: Moral Dilemmas<\/span><\/span>","dateCreated":"1381973428","user":{"username":"stevenrdwolfe","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/stevenrdwolfe","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"diffUrl":"\/page\/diff\/home\/460548322?mode=code"}],"replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"64389308","dateCreated":"1381973694","smartDate":"Oct 16, 2013","userCreated":{"username":"stevenrdwolfe","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/stevenrdwolfe","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/chuchoeng1302.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/64389308"},"dateDigested":1532652773,"commentId":"460548322_1","orphaned":false,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"comment","title":"Comment: The rubric specifically states that i...","description":"The rubric specifically states that int he opening paragraph you will introduce the issues and not discuss the story itself.","rangeActions":[{"name":"Comment added","rangeText":"choice of either leaving or staying in a perfect society called Omelas; with no problems of any kind, everyone doing what they are suppose to do, no crimes, perfect houses, everything is just perfect, but this is only possible if a child of such society is neglected from it, not kill nor physically abused, just neglected from everything. Also, know that if you choose to leave, the destination is, as mention in the story, \u201ca place even less imaginable to most of us than the city of happiness\u201d (LeGuin).<\/span> Whether to stay or walk away from Omelas, a perfect Utopia, that is the question. I would included myself in the group of people that would walk away from Omelas because I would not be able to live with myself knowing that my \u201chappiness\u201d is caused by the suffering of a child","dateCreated":"1381973695","user":{"username":"stevenrdwolfe","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/stevenrdwolfe","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"diffUrl":"\/page\/diff\/home\/460549624?mode=code"}],"replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"64389310","dateCreated":"1381973695","smartDate":"Oct 16, 2013","userCreated":{"username":"stevenrdwolfe","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/stevenrdwolfe","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/chuchoeng1302.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/64389310"},"dateDigested":1532652773,"commentId":"460548322_2","orphaned":false,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"comment","title":"Comment: You have to explain why you think thi...","description":"You have to explain why you think this is morally wrong.","rangeActions":[{"name":"Comment added","rangeText":"t be able to live with myself morally knowing that one child is neglected in order to keep such a perfect city.","dateCreated":"1381973696","user":{"username":"stevenrdwolfe","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/stevenrdwolfe","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"diffUrl":"\/page\/diff\/home\/460549624?mode=code"}],"replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"64389312","dateCreated":"1381973696","smartDate":"Oct 16, 2013","userCreated":{"username":"stevenrdwolfe","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/stevenrdwolfe","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/chuchoeng1302.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/64389312"},"dateDigested":1532652773,"commentId":"460548322_3","orphaned":false,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"comment","title":"Comment: You have to briefly explain what this...","description":"You have to briefly explain what this is and how it applies.","rangeActions":[{"name":"Comment added","rangeText":"Just like in the Coventry Bombing, is t okay to sa","dateCreated":"1381973696","user":{"username":"stevenrdwolfe","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/stevenrdwolfe","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"diffUrl":"\/page\/diff\/home\/460549624?mode=code"}],"replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"65030622","dateCreated":"1384884189","smartDate":"Nov 19, 2013","userCreated":{"username":"stevenrdwolfe","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/stevenrdwolfe","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/chuchoeng1302.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/65030622"},"dateDigested":1532652773,"commentId":"467480950_2","orphaned":false,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"comment","title":"Comment: Ok useful opening","description":"Ok useful opening","rangeActions":[{"name":"Comment added","rangeText":"nts in Finland came out on top overall. Other top-performing countries were: Hong Kong, Canada, Taiwan, Estonia, Japan and Korea.\u201d [2] What makes our country lag behind? Might be that the \u201cWhite House estimated<\/span> that Title I funding that goes to schools with large populations of low-income students would be eliminated for more than 2,700 and cut off support to 1.2 million disadvantaged students [3], or maybe that \u201cspecial education support cuts were predicted to eliminate more than 7,200 teachers and aides\u201d [3]. Education is a tool that we have that help us create harmony and peace by te","dateCreated":"1384884190","user":{"username":"stevenrdwolfe","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/stevenrdwolfe","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"diffUrl":"\/page\/diff\/home\/470437022?mode=code"}],"replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"65030620","dateCreated":"1384884189","smartDate":"Nov 19, 2013","userCreated":{"username":"stevenrdwolfe","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/stevenrdwolfe","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/chuchoeng1302.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/65030620"},"dateDigested":1532652773,"commentId":"467480950_1","orphaned":false,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"comment","title":"Comment: spelling","description":"spelling","rangeActions":[{"name":"Comment added","rangeText":"cant","dateCreated":"1384884189","user":{"username":"stevenrdwolfe","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/stevenrdwolfe","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"diffUrl":"\/page\/diff\/home\/470437022?mode=code"}],"replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"65030624","dateCreated":"1384884190","smartDate":"Nov 19, 2013","userCreated":{"username":"stevenrdwolfe","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/stevenrdwolfe","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/chuchoeng1302.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/65030624"},"dateDigested":1532652773,"commentId":"467480950_3","orphaned":false,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"comment","title":"Comment: 1. You need to provide specific refer...","description":"1. You need to provide specific references that show how you know this is what he thinks.
\n2. He does say specifically what he thinks the problem is.","rangeActions":[{"name":"Comment added","rangeText":"Doc Paskowitz talks about how he is against our education system. Paskowitz thinks that school are not teaching what matters. In his point of view, what matters are: teaching life lessons, morality, family values, and that true knowledge came from real-world experiences. Something that he mentions is the things that he thinks shouldn\u2019t be taught in school and they are being taught anyways, things such as: conformity and materialism. Paskowitz doesn\u2019t get much into details of what is causing this but he thinks that if education system keeps teaching the wrong things, this is going to lead to annihilation of our peace and harmony among our kind.","dateCreated":"1384884190","user":{"username":"stevenrdwolfe","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/stevenrdwolfe","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"diffUrl":"\/page\/diff\/home\/470437022?mode=code"}],"replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"65030626","dateCreated":"1384884190","smartDate":"Nov 19, 2013","userCreated":{"username":"stevenrdwolfe","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/stevenrdwolfe","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/chuchoeng1302.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/65030626"},"dateDigested":1532652773,"commentId":"467480950_4","orphaned":false,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"comment","title":"Comment: Cut. Just say, "Our educational ...","description":"Cut. Just say, "Our educational system is broken." We know it's what you think because you are writing it.","rangeActions":[{"name":"Comment added","rangeText":"In my opinion, I think","dateCreated":"1384884191","user":{"username":"stevenrdwolfe","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/stevenrdwolfe","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"diffUrl":"\/page\/diff\/home\/470437022?mode=code"}],"replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]}]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}